Monday, March 8, 2010

It's Deafening When You're Gone

Torn left
and left aching -
torn right
and right on.


Right on the spot
for where it hurts most.
I ache where the bruises blot
over my bones.


Right on the spot
for where it hurts hard.
I ache where the bruises blot
over my heart.


And we think to ourselves,
It's going to get
loud in here.


Here is where

I get going.
Wish me the best of luck.
Wish you were lucky to have me.


Here is where
you are not.
I wish I could have you.
I wish you could see my bruises blot. 

2 comments:

  1. Heyya, hopped here thru Anus blog... and liked this one quite a bit... infact writing some music for it and tryin to string it in a song :)

    Cheers,
    Annie.
    P.S: I'll credit you if my tunes a hit :P :)

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  2. thnk u so much ....gimme da frst copy of da sng .... :P

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